heyyaaa loves. 😀 I know I’m too excited haha but my exams have finished and half of me feels like I CAN DO ANYTHING IN THE WORLD NOW! So I decided that the fact that I owe you all this, is more important than any other fun thing I might have on my mind. As this is the last part of “Wondrous”, I just want you to know that imagining this was one of the best feelings of my life and I hope that reading it proves to be one of yours. If not best, then, well, fairly delightful. 😛
Here is the last bit of the previous part, to freshen up your memory:
So we just stay there side by side, and watch them, awe-struck. They swing to and fro and we yearn to touch them when they surround us, but we stay still so as to not scare them away. I give Harry a glance and smile- who knew that someone else, someone I was unlikely to ever even know of, being a different kind of species, for crying out loud, could adore the same thing I adored? Little by little, the fireflies move upwards forming a triangular shape, with their queen, I assume, at the very top and start to leave the cave through a half-foot large hole in the roof. After the last one of them is gone, I hear myself exhaling deeply, as if I had held my breath the whole time.
x-x-x
”Did you like it?” he asks.
”I loved it.” I say.
”Yeah me too.”
”It reminded me of stars you know. And this whole trip actually. The sea is truly as majestic as an endless starry sky.”
At that, he turned to me, all wide eyed and curious. ”Tell me more?”
”Wait, you mean to say that you’ve never seen the night sky?” I exclaim, of sorts.
”No. I live here. There’s no sky here. I’ve only ever been to the surface twice or thrice.”
”I have to show you then.” I announce, getting up, pulling him along.”Is there something else left to see here?”
”No, it’s time for you to be taken back I think. Let’s call the whale so it can carry you up…” There’s a strange detachment in his voice as he looks down and speaks softly.
”You know what? Why not you take me?” I am not going to leave without showing you the stars any way.”
It seems like he’s trying to understand if I’m joking or not. I shrug. He finally decides to believe me and says, ”Alright then. Come on!”, beaming.
And so we exit the cave, finding a few creatures outside, waiting for us. Harry tells the kind whale about our plan to go by ourselves. Fortunately she doesn’t seem to mind. I hug everyone goodbye, even the boulder (I have a tendency to like hugging inanimate objects), take a deep breath, and a fulfilling look around. I am trying to memorise as much of this feeling as I possibly can, to replay on rainy days. ”I’m ready.” I finally say.
”Do you want to swim without my help now?”, Harry asks, with a mischievous look.
”Yeah I’d like that. But we can’t really acheive that can we? I mean being stuck and all”, I reply.
”Are you sure?” Still the look lingers, now accompanied with a smile.
I shrug again, and he just pulls away. Just like that, leaving me open-mouthed.
”You KNEW how to do that!?”
”Yeah. It’s my body isn’t it? Of course I did.”
”Oh my god! You’re the worst you know that?” I laugh, shaking my head. He giggles too.
With that last wave of sudden bliss, only one of the many that I, and everybody, experiences with friends, we swim towards the surface. I’m thinking how much I will miss every part of this, as we hurry towards the dim light of the moon, penetrating the surface of the sea, reaching us looking like a portal to heaven. Sure we are going to see my other favourite thing in the world, and if I were to narrate that experience too- witnessing a newbie embracing the elegance of the sky, like he did with me and the sea- I am sure I will require another 10 pages, but I know I will never forget the last seven hours of my life, and will always be more than grateful, and more than eager to come back any time my life decides to be this wondrous again.
This was ahmazing. 😀 It is seriously the name you gave it. *o*
I want more! ,_,
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Thank you so muchh!! I don’t have more :p Bas itna hi tha. :$
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Welcome ^_^ Ach jee 😛
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*applauds* truly was wondrous 🙂
well done fella! 😉
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Thank you! 😀 it’s an honour!
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YOU WIN, MAN. HOW DID YOU? I AM SO. AWED. I READ TEENO PARTS RIGHT NOW. I WAS THERE, BREATHLESS LIKE YOU AND THE TINY TINY DETAILS EVEN ROCK KI OPENING MATLAB JAHAN SE FIREFLIES OF THE SEA NIKLEEN THI, THE WHOLE LIGHT SHOW, THIS CUTE WHAT WAS THIS? THIS FRIEND HARRY AND THE BOULDER WALA PART ALSO THE (HUGGING INANIMATE OBJECT) YE AND THE WHOLE IMAGINATION MASHA ALLAH, MASHA ALLAH. I WILL STOP. I LOVE THIS STORY. I SOUND SO… IT’S SO WELL-WRITTEN AND BEAUTIFULLY DETAILED AND IT WAS FUN. Okay. It was nice.
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THIS IS MY KINDA COMMENT. Seriously this is how I comment 😛 I LOVE ITTTT THANK YOUU FOR SAYING ALL THAT. I am a ittle too in love with the sea (but u know there’s no such thing as too much) and that is why I write about it like this. I loved writing this honestly it kinda gave me a place to escape to. As if I was actually there going through all of that. :’) So it means a lot that u enjoyed so much, something that was very close to my heart. ❤
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I am sure you loved writing this. BECAUSE WORDS MAN. THE MAGICAL PLACES THEY TAKE US TO. IMAGINATION, GOD. It was beautifully described, I’ll tell you again. Khubsoorat. And it was a pleasure to read. ❤
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Why every good thing has to end? Why is everything temporary? YOU SHOULD WRITE ANOTHER PART. PLEASE.
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hahaha well I’m already headed to the shore so what will i wrte about?? 😀
and I am having the best time reading your comments thank you so much! 😀
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Headed to the shore? Awesome. Lucky you. You know what to write about. Another part.
You’re welcome 🙂
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Hahaha! 😀 Well I will see.
There is one about dragons and a fortress in my mind btw. I just have to write it down.
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Oh okay.. Write that one then. 🙂
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🙂 insha Allah.
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:):)
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Hahaha you’re very kind honestly. I’m honoured that you stalked some of my blog posts and shared your thoughts about them with me. Thank you so much! :’)
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No I’m really honoured. I should thank you because I know i don’t really deserve all this appreciation.
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Nahh. Being polite is one thing but I don’t throw such genuine comments around for no reason. And I definitely wouldn’t stalk your blog if I wasn’t actually enjoying.
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Okay now I’m really really honoured.
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Hahaha I’m really really happy to know that! 🙂
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Thank you so much 😊 🙂
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You’re welcome 🙂
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:):)
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Btw you must find a way to see the sea. It’s the most beautiful and my favourite thing in the entire world. It really is the best feeling.
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Yeah I will. I have that on my to-do list now 🙂 I have an opportunity to go to Karachi in April but I cannot because of studies. Let’s see how things go.
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Ahan. It’d be awesome if you get the chance. Please let me know when you do! I’d love to know how you liked it.
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Haha okay. If I remember I will. 🙂
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Insha Allah 🙂 duas.
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Stay blessed 🙂
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Shukriya. You do too 🙂
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🙂
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